I have taken a few liberties with it to make it flow as a story should, connecting otherwise disjointed ideas or story lines, introduction of proper nouns, addition of certain details to make it more appropriate for this venue, the necessities to make it readable
. Instead of directly harming Ellie he forces her to watch as he takes her spider.
. She shook her head in protest, but I just kept going. “Adarian!” Elena screamed, tears streaming down her face, “Please don’t
I have taken a few liberties with it to make it flow as a story should, connecting otherwise disjointed ideas or story lines, introduction of proper nouns, addition of certain details to make it more appropriate for this venue, the necessities to make it readable
. Instead of directly harming Ellie he forces her to watch as he takes her spider.
. She shook her head in protest, but I just kept going. “Adarian!” Elena screamed, tears streaming down her face, “Please don’t
I have taken a few liberties with it to make it flow as a story should, connecting otherwise disjointed ideas or story lines, introduction of proper nouns, addition of certain details to make it more appropriate for this venue, the necessities to make it readable
. Instead of directly harming Ellie he forces her to watch as he takes her spider.
. She shook her head in protest, but I just kept going. “Adarian!” Elena screamed, tears streaming down her face, “Please don’t
